What if you were given a limited amount of time, say sixty seconds, to solve a mystery. Could you do it?
My goal with this script was simply to create a situation wherein I imagined I had only one set, and seven or eight actors/actresses for one day. Much like most of today's speed filmmaking competitions you may have read about or even participated in. Enjoy.
FADE IN:
INT. JACK'S BAR AND GRILL -- DAY
A modern day sports bar, of medium size. The kitchen is
closed. Seven stools at the bar, and several tables strewn
evenly about.
JACK, a man in his late 20's, unlocks his bar to start the
day. He struts behind the bar, turns the tv on to the
pregame show, and starts to wipe down the bar.
A man, JOHN SMITH stumbles in. He appears to have been
shot 3 times.
JOHN SMITH
Help me!
Jack runs to the man.
JOHN SMITH
My girlfriend did this to me. I was
suppose to meet her here.
He falls dead in Jack's arms.
Jack lies him down, and checks for ID. He finds a wallet
in the inner jacket pocket, takes it out, and reads.
JACK
"John Smith." Wonderful.
Jack drags the body to the kitchen. Returns behind the
bar, picks up the phone, and dials 911.
JACK
Yes...I'm at Jack's Bar and Grill,
and someone's been shot.... He's
dead. Could you send the police
right away?
He hangs up.
ANGLE ON DOORWAY
A tall redhead, SUZY, drop dead gorgeous, and seductively
dressed, strides in.
ANGLE ON BAR
She takes a stool to the far left. Jack moves to take her
order.
JACK
What'll you have?
SUZY
Long Island Iced Tea. I'm waiting
for a man named John, has he
arrived?
JACK
No...I'll have your drink in a
moment.
SUZY
There's a fashion show on E! Could
you change the channel?
JACK
Sure. No problem.
He finds the remote behind the bar, and changes the
channel. A fashion show is in progress.
BENNY, one of the bar's regulars, walks up, and puts a
stool between himself and Suzy, sits down, and motions
Jack.
BENNY
I'll have the usual.
JACK
Coming right up, Benny.
BENNY
Where's the game? If I wanted to
see this, I could've stayed home
with my wife.
JACK
Kickoff's not for fifteen minutes,
Benny. Be patient.
A petite blonde takes a seat on the other side of Benny.
Jack tends.
BLONDE
Has John arrived yet?
JACK
Er, no. What can I get for you
today?
BLONDE
I'll have Sex On The Beach.
JACK
That's nice, but what would you like
to drink? Old bartender joke,
coming right up.
Jack goes into his routine, throwing bottles into the air,
spinning them over his head, and behind his back, pouring
liquers into the shaker, and eventually into the glass.
He plonks the drink in front of the blonde, and tosses two
straws in the glass.
A round of applause follows.
JACK
Thank you, thank you! I'm here all
week!
BENNY
I never tire of that.
JACK
That'll be five dollars.
The blonde puts a ten on the bar. Jack goes to the cash
register, and rings her up, and gives her five ones back.
She leaves them all on the bar, and takes a sip.
She smiles, and takes three of the ones back inside her
purse. She's about to leave, but notices the fashion show
on the tv, and retakes her stool.
ANGLE ON DOORWAY
A tall, thin man enters. He notices the empty stool next
to Suzy, and takes it. The SMOKER takes out a pack of
cigarettes, taps one out, and begins to light up.
JACK
Excuse me, sir. I can't let you do
that, laws being what they are.
SMOKER
That's ok, I brought my own ashtray.
Smoker pulls an ashtray out of his jacket pocket, and sets
it on the bar, after taking a puff.
Suzy shies away, As does Benny on his other side.
MANNY, a stout man of Spanish decent, takes an empty stool,
and plops down.
MANNY
Jack, I'll have a beer. Place sure
is filling up, when's the game
start?
JACK
Soon. Here you go.
He places a mug of draft in front of Manny.
ANGLE ON DOORWAY
A young couple enters. Musclebound with a crew cut, he
wears army camos, and dogtags. The tall lanky brunette,
MARIE, he arrives with on his arm dresses casually.
ANGLE ON BAR FAVORING EMPTY STOOLS
They march up to the two remaining empty stools next to
Manny.
Jack throws two napkins in front of them.
JACK
What would you like?
JOHN C
She'll have a cuba libra, and I'll
have a rum and coke.
She pulls his dogtags. Jack notices that they read "John
Covington."
MARIE
I hate when you order for me!
JACK
Whatever you like...
MARIE
Cuba libra.
He walks away, shaking his head.
ANGLE ON DOORWAY
As sirens can be heard in the distance, a thin non descript
MAN sneaks in, and sits at a table toward the back, with a
view of the tv.
ANGLE ON TV
Suzy walks down the runway, in the latest sexy fashion.
SUZY
(pointing)
There I am on the runway! That's
me, that's me!!!
The rest at the bar look at the screen, in awe.
John C takes special interest.
BENNY
Could we watch the game now, or
what? Manny, are you with me?
MANNY
Yeah, Jack, put on the game.
Jack moves to the remote, and starts to change the channel.
SUZY
I'm still watching!
Jack changes the channel back.
BENNY
Let's put it to a vote...who wants
to see the game?
MANNY
I do.
JOHN C
Um, yeah, sure.
BENNY
That's three. Anyone else?
He nudges the smoker.
BENNY
Any one else?
Smoker grunts, not paying attention.
JACK
Ok, that's three. And you girls all
want to see the fashion show?
They all nod and answer in agreement.
JACK
Fashion show it is then.
BENNY
What do you mean?!?
This is roughly about half of the 11 page script if I recall correctly. Maybe a little more if I don't. You'd think that when you perform the Select All command, it would in fact highlight all of the text. Maybe my browser is right. I need a new computer....
Or at least a better understanding of what the OS will do after it can't take anymore security updates. However, that's not what this is about.
Based on the above, If I had around $150K, I could probably produce this, or any other feature film, for that matter. I have those unproduced scripts ready to go, although, the industry or the business that we call show, may have a different definition of "Ready to go."
You may question my financial math, however, there's several variables that go into making a movie that most know absolutely nothing about, up to and including how much it costs to get an actor you recognize to take time out of their busy schedule to work for someone they've never heard of before.
I hope that I get to make this one someday, however, I'd prefer to make my award winning feature first. That way I'd be able to keep a lot of promises that I've made over the years to those that I've worked with in the past.
You may even be reading this, I don't know.
Let me know what you think when you think it in all the usual places.
72 and sunny in Redondo Beach. e You next time.™